Online edit of cave 1626-359

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@@ -113,41 +113,37 @@ down and one short pitch up in 2019; extensively rerigged in 2023; problems with
 drops down to the base of a large meander then lands on a ledge. From
 the ledge, two short hangs lead to a very exposed stance below which
 the continuing meander bells out into a large free hanging rift
-pitch, <b>Grommit</b> (p55). (<i>Traversing S along the walls of the
-</i><i><b>Grommit</b></i><i> is likely to gain entry to the upstream
-continuation of </i><i><b>The Second Coming; </b></i><i>this is QMA
-2019-12A). </i>Around 10m from the base of Grommit pitch it is
+pitch, <b>Grommit</b> (p55). <i>Traversing S along the walls of <b>Grommit</b> is likely to gain entry to the upstream
+continuation of <b>The Second Coming; </b>this is QMA 2019-12A). </i>. 
+  
+<p>Around 10m from the base of Grommit pitch it is
 possible to swing onto a ledge on the W wall (this is awkward to rig;
 the easiest option is to descend to the base of the pitch and climb
 up the wall protected with jammers on the pitch rope). Traversing
 along the ledge leads to an abandoned meander with a very strong
 outward draft. A short p5 N at PT03 at the far end of the traverse
-drops down to the start of <b>The Second Coming. whilst a p8 up from PT03 to a small phreatic tube on the R leads to <b>Propane
-Nightmares). </b> </p>
+drops down to the start of <b>The Second Coming</b> whilst a p8 up from PT03 to a small phreatic tube on the R leads to <b>Propane Nightmares.</b></p>
   
-<p>  <i>Continuing
-to the bottom of ><b>Grommit </b>lands on a rock floor
+<p>  <i>Continuing to the bottom of ><b>Grommit </b>lands on a rock floor
 with a vadose trench and a stream in the bottom. This leads via a p10
 to a short series of narrow tubes which end in tight sumps and
 chokes.</i></p>
 
 <H3>The Second Coming</H3>
 
-<p><b>The Second Coming
-</b>starts below the p5 N of PT03 (which is at the end of the
+<p><b>The Second Coming</b> starts below the p5 N of PT03 (which is at the end of the
 traverse from the Entrance Series). The passage continues as a very drafty phreatic
 tube with a vadose trench to quickly reach a junction at PT04.
-(<i>Heading L at this junction leads to </i><i><b>Hobnob Hallway</b></i><i>
-(described in a separate section below). </i>Continuing directly NE
-along <b>The Second Coming </b>the passage immediately passes a small
+(<i>Heading L at this junction leads to <b>Hobnob Hallway</b> (described separately below). </i>Continuing directly NE
+along <b>The Second Coming</b> the passage immediately passes a small
 L passage (<i>this immediately goes to a junction. Here, L oxbows
-down Kitkat Connection straight back to Hobnob Hallway whilst R goes
-to a passage which eventually connects back in to The Second Coming at PT05). </i>After a further
+down <b>Kitkat Connection</b> straight back to <b>Hobnob Hallway</b> whilst R goes
+to a passage which eventually connects back in to <b>The Second Coming</b> at PT05). </i>After a further
 section of straight, high rift to the NE it quickly reaches a junction at
 PT05 with a large, abandoned meander. (<i>Dropping down 3m to the floor here and heading back L heads SW. The roof gradually lowers - passing a
-junction on the L that goes to Kitkat Connection - until a high aven
+junction on the L that goes to <b>Kitkat Connection</b> - until a high aven
 with a flowstone floor is reached. Beyond this aven a short section
-of passage leads to a series of holes that may still be QMs after 2024 (2018-10C, 2018-11B, 2018-11A. Continuing SW leads via a 15m drop to a further connection with Hobnob Hallway with several avens in the connection area.</i></p>
+of passage leads to a series of holes that may still be QMs after 2024 (2018-10C, 2018-11B, 2018-11A. Continuing SW leads via a 15m drop to a further connection with <b>Hobnob Hallway</b> with several avens in the connection area.</i></p>
 
 <p>From PT05, heading
 ‘upstream’ (though there is not always any water flowing) from