Online edit of cave 1626-359

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@@ -91,13 +91,12 @@ the second snow plug a short, drafting crawl over boulders leads directly to two
 a short wriggle through boulders on the L side of the passage leads
 to a short section of rift passage ending at a p3 to a ledge. The
 ledge looks out over a large chamber with jammed boulders in the roof
-directly opposite the ledge. <i>(There may be passage leading off
-from these jammed boulders, QMB). </i>The p30 from this ledge to the
+directly opposite the ledge. <i>(There may be passage leading off from these jammed boulders, QMB - unclear if this QM remains). </i>The p30 from this ledge to the
 boulder floor of the chamber is <b>Radagast</b>.<p>
  
 <p><i>5m below the top of <b>Radagast</b> it is
 possible to swing into a series of small phreatic tubes and immature
-  vadose shafts trending SW at point PT01 and leading past PT02. This leads to a pitch series, <b>Welsh Engineering</b>, which, in 2024, was eventually connected to <b>Hobnob Hallway</b> via the <b>Eye of Sauron</b>. This therefore provides an alternate entrance series. However, in 2024 it was flood prone and the rigging caused problems and would need considerable effort to make safe so it may not be revisited despite the survey not being connected in or completed..</i></p>
+  vadose shafts trending SW at point PT01 and leading past PT02. This leads to a pitch series, <b>Welsh Engineering</b>, which, in 2024, was eventually connected to <b>Hobnob Hallway</b> via the <b>Eye of Sauron</b>. This therefore provides an alternate entrance series. However, in 2024 it was flood prone and the rigging caused problems and would need considerable effort to make safe so it may not be revisited despite the survey not being connected in or completed.</i></p>
 
 <p>From the bottom of
 <b>Radagast</b> a traverse on the L along a bedrock ledge with jammed
@@ -123,34 +122,32 @@ the easiest option is to descend to the base of the pitch and climb
 up the wall protected with jammers on the pitch rope). Traversing
 along the ledge leads to an abandoned meander with a very strong
 outward draft. A short p5 N at PT03 at the far end of the traverse
-drops down to the start of <b>The Second Coming. </b><i>(Continuing
-to the bottom of </i><i><b>Grommit </b></i><i>lands on a rock floor
+drops down to the start of <b>The Second Coming. whilst a p8 up from PT03 to a small phreatic tube on the R leads to <b>Propane
+Nightmares). </b> </p>
+  
+<p>  <i>Continuing
+to the bottom of ><b>Grommit </b>lands on a rock floor
 with a vadose trench and a stream in the bottom. This leads via a p10
 to a short series of narrow tubes which end in tight sumps and
-chokes).</i></p>
+chokes.</i></p>
 
 <H3>The Second Coming</H3>
 
 <p><b>The Second Coming
 </b>starts below the p5 N of PT03 (which is at the end of the
-traverse from the Entrance Series). (<i>From here a p8 (left rigged
-2019) up to a small phreatic tube on the R leads to </i><i><b>Propane
-Nightmares). </b></i>The passage continues as a very drafty phreatic
+traverse from the Entrance Series). The passage continues as a very drafty phreatic
 tube with a vadose trench to quickly reach a junction at PT04.
 (<i>Heading L at this junction leads to </i><i><b>Hobnob Hallway</b></i><i>
 (described in a separate section below). </i>Continuing directly NE
 along <b>The Second Coming </b>the passage immediately passes a small
 L passage (<i>this immediately goes to a junction. Here, L oxbows
 down Kitkat Connection straight back to Hobnob Hallway whilst R goes
-to a parallel passage to The Second Coming). </i>After a further
-section of straight, high rift to the NE it reaches a junction at
-PT05 with a large, abandoned meander. (<i>L here heading downstream
-and SW in this meander, the roof gradually lowers - passing a
+to a passage which eventually connects back in to The Second Coming at PT05). </i>After a further
+section of straight, high rift to the NE it quickly reaches a junction at
+PT05 with a large, abandoned meander. (<i>Dropping down 3m to the floor here and heading back L heads SW. The roof gradually lowers - passing a
 junction on the L that goes to Kitkat Connection - until a high aven
 with a flowstone floor is reached. Beyond this aven a short section
-of passage leads to a pitch (QMA) with a passage visible on the other
-side (QMA) that is presumed to be the continuation of the
-aforementioned meander).</i></p>
+of passage leads to a series of holes that may still be QMs after 2024 (2018-10C, 2018-11B, 2018-11A. Continuing SW leads via a 15m drop to a further connection with Hobnob Hallway with several avens in the connection area.</i></p>
 
 <p>From PT05, heading
 ‘upstream’ (though there is not always any water flowing) from