Online edit of cave 1626-359

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@@ -142,7 +142,8 @@ section of straight, high rift to the NE it quickly reaches a junction at
 PT05 with a large, abandoned meander. <i>Dropping down 3m to the floor here and heading back L goes SW. The roof gradually lowers - soon passing a
 junction on the L that goes to <b>Kitkat Connection</b> - until a high aven
 with a flowstone floor is reached. Beyond this aven a short section
-of passage leads to a series of holes that may still be QMs after 2024 (2018-10C, 2018-11B, 2018-11A. Continuing SW leads via a 15m drop to a further connection with <b>Hobnob Hallway</b> with several unexplored avens in the connection area.</i></p>
+of passage leads to a series of holes that may still be QMs after 2024 (2018-10C, 2018-11B, 2018-11A. Continuing SW this passage, <b>Cawodydd 
+Cachlyd</b> leads via a 15m drop to a further connection at the bottom of <b>Papsi Passage</b> in <b>Hobnob Hallway</b> with several unexplored avens in the connection area.</i></p>
 
 <p>From PT05, drop down 3m (handline from bolts helpful but do not use any further bolts for unnecessary traverse, see below) to the base of the canyon and head ‘upstream’ (though there is not always any water flowing). Sideways walking along the meandering canyon soon reaches an area of boulder collapse <i>(ignore the unnecessary traverse that used to be rigged 4m above the canyon as far as the boulder collapse)</i>. Climb under the boulders and then climb up into a traverse, <b>Wilfully
 Endangering Lives</b> that goes above the meander below to a junction at PT06 <i>; it is also possible to continue along the bottom of the meander although the passage is narrow</i>. At PT06 a phreatic tube on the L comes in at the height you are now traversing, around 8m above the floor of the meander. (<i>If you instead reached PT06 along the base of the meander you can continue along the meander from here by turning sharp right at PT06 and then left, passing a number of pools and sections of crawling to reach a large pool across the entire passage.
@@ -165,32 +166,30 @@ there is a climb down on the L into a passage which is presumed to be
 <p>Heading north from PT11 leads to a high-level traverse for 20m to another pitch-head. Descending this leads to a 1-bolt wonder in good rock and then to a Y-hang which is descended to another traverse. <i>The deviation MUST be used to prevent catastrophic rope rub.</i> At the end of the traverse there is a brief section of walking passage then a further traverse which terminates at a pitch-head with rope rub.This can be descended to a Y-hang which <i>MUST have a rope-protector placed</i> to prevent concerning rope rub.  Bottoming this chamber leads to a small calcified aven and small stream at the south side and a large, clean washed, aven at the north. The northern aven can be descended into via a 1-bolt wonder (about 7m) and leads to a high-level, clean-washed rift traverse which quickly opens over a very large chamber (maybe 20m wide, very long and something like 40m+ deep. This may be part of the same rift system seen at the end of <b>Brief Respite</b> and connects back towards <b>Watershed</b> as a hydrological connection at minimum). Continuing in the traverse leads to a phreatic tube on the left, <b>Brief Respite</b>. This is easy stomping passage with a few small waterfalls. After about 80m the passage constricts and leads to an airy traverse over a huge chamber where a distant waterfall can be heard. A Y-hang is in place to drop the chamber. The chamber is expected to be around 50m+ deep.</p>
 
 
-<H3>Hobnob Hallway</H3>
+<H3>Hobnob Hallway to Lassitude Canyon</H3>
 
-<p><i>(This description
-should be checked and related to the QMs marked on the survey)</i>Heading L at the first junction along <b>The Second Coming</b>
+<p><i>This description needs checking. It omits the short pitches / handlines en route to Goose Box and mentions leads that have likely been eliminated.</i> Heading L at the first junction along <b>The Second Coming</b> at PT04
 leads to <b>Hobnob Hallway</b>. This starts as a sand floored
 phreatic passage. A short distance along a hole in the floor leads N
 to <b>Kit Kat connection </b>which loops back to <b>The Second
-Coming</b>. Further along, a fine false floor crosses a small stream,
-not explored. A small sandy slope leads down to a canyon on the R,
+Coming</b> in two places and to further along Hobnob Hallway. Continuing, a fine false floor crosses a small stream,
+not explored (perhaps too tight?). A small sandy slope leads down to a canyon on the R,
 with a phreatic passage at the top. A short way along this phreas,
 <b>Phil Lynn’s Concert Hall</b>, a small chamber, is reached. From
-here a hole to the R leads to <b>Dead Bat Dead End</b>. Back at the
+  here a scramble up loose boulders on the R leads to a chamber whilst a hole to the R <i>(check, looks like it is on the L / south) </i>leads to <b>Dead Bat Dead End</b>. Back at the
 canyon, a small passage can be followed to another junction,
 returning to the canyon. To the R is unsurveyed, but the L continues
 along a phreatic named <b>Papsi Passage</b>, with the canyon in the
 floor. Occasional smaller (barely body sized) phreatics break off
-from this. Eventually the canyon is lost, and the phreatic continues.
-A further junction is reached, to the R, <b>Papsi Passage</b> continues. 
+from this and <b>Cawodydd 
+Cachlyd</b> in <b>The Second Coming</b> connects in here. Eventually the canyon is lost, and the phreatic continues.
+A further junction is reached. To the R here <b>Papsi Passage</b> continues. 
 To the L leads down<b> Dead Fly Passage</b>, ending at the
 top of a canyon, presumably the continuation of the earlier canyon.
 <b>Papsi Passage</b> continues in the phreatic until it too reaches a
-canyon, presumably the same)<i>. </i>
-</p>
+canyon, presumably the same one.</p>
 
-<h3>Propane
-Nightmares</h3>
+<h3>Propane Nightmares to Watershed then Flowstone Canyon and Paradise Lost</h3>
 
 <p>From PT03 at the end
 of the traverse from the Entrance Series descend the p5 to the N.