Online edit of cave 1626-359

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@@ -196,25 +196,22 @@ To the L at PT15 leads down<b> Dead Flies Passage</b>.</p>
 the start of the passage a narrow canyon leads up on the R and then
 heads steeply down towards the sound of a waterfall. This ends in a
 steep slope which the survey suggests connects with <b>Grommit</b>)</i>.
-The main passage up a c8 with a handline
+The main passage goes up a c8 with a handline
 which is immediately followed by a p12
 down. Continuing east soon reaches a three-way junction at PT21, in a confusing, mazy area. The usual route is to go right to a second 
 junction, where right again leads the the top of a p5 down. <i>Just before PT21 a tube high on the right leads to a passage which emerges above and opposite the p5 after a few metres of crawling.</i> 
   
-<p><i>At PT21 if you instead turned left at the junction then keep left at a second junction (right here loops you back to the bottom of the p5 described earlier; this route thus bypasses the p5 but it is not recommended as falling into the static sump would likely be
-fatal) you reach a 
-steeply descending phreas with a squeeze to a steep sided static
-sump. A 12m traverse line over the static sump leads to a phreatic tube that pops out at the basin of <b>Heifer</b>. From here, a p5 climb up then a p7 up takes you into a rift. Beneath (behind?) is the <b>Great Heifer</b>, a now superfluous bolt climb. (The following section does not fit with the survey - is it describing the superceded bolt climb? "This is a very awkward traverse to climb into. This traverse then continues for 20m"). There is then a deviated p15 that drops you into the <b>Cow Trough</b>, a large, static sump. Traverse over this sump to a small rift that continues for about 20 meters. To the right is a QMC bolt climb into a rift. This is not marked on the survey.The passage continues as a low, difficult traverse over a pool. This can be drained slightly by digging. The passage opens up on the other side to a tall rift which continues to <b>Cowlick Aven</b>. This is a large aven with some pheatic leads going onwards and a large aven in the roof that discharges bunde. A large passage goes upwards to the right requiring a bolt climb to enter.</i> </p>
+<p><i>At PT21, if you instead turned left at the junction then keep left at a second junction (right here loops you back to the bottom of the p5 described earlier; this route thus bypasses the p5 but it is not recommended as falling into the static sump would likely be fatal) you reach a 
+steeply descending phreas with a squeeze to a steep sided static sump. A 12m traverse line over the static sump leads to a phreatic tube that pops out at the basin of <b>Heifer</b>. From here, a p5 climb up then a p7 up takes you into a rift. Beneath (behind you?) the rift is the <b>Great Heifer</b>, a now superfluous bolt climb. (The previoius and following section does not fit with the survey - is it describing the superceded bolt climb? "This is a very awkward traverse to climb into. This traverse then continues for 20m"). There is then a deviated p15 that drops you down into the <b>Cow Trough</b>, a large, static sump. Traverse over this sump to a small rift that continues for about 20 meters. To the right is a QMC bolt climb into a rift. This is not marked on the survey.The passage continues as a low, difficult traverse over a pool. This can be drained slightly by digging. The passage opens up on the other side to a tall rift which continues to <b>Cowlick Aven</b>. This is a large aven with some pheatic leads going onwards and a large aven in the roof that discharges bunde. A large passage goes upwards to the right requiring a bolt climb to enter.</i> </p>
 
-<p>From the bottom of the p5 that follows PT21, the passage develops a trench in the floor and soon leads to an obvious T junction at PT22. This has a large pitch in the floor, <b> Simple Pleasures</b><i>. (To the
-  R leads to a splashy aven and the head of an immature canyon, QM_not_worth_the_misery, this could lead to the QMC in <b>Simple Pleasures</b>). </i>To the L at the PT22 junction is a
-short, roped traverse (left rigged 2019) which leads to a crawling
+<p>From the bottom of the p5 that follows soon after PT21, the passage develops a deep trench in the floor so a traverse line is needed and soon leads to an obvious T junction at PT22. <i>To the R at the T junction at PT22 leads to a splashy aven and the head of an immature canyon, a QM ?2019-3C_which is probably not_worth_the_misery, this could lead to the QMC in <b>Simple Pleasures</b>). The pitch in the floor at PT22,  <b>Simple Pleasures</b>, drops into a small chamber which leads quickly into a larger chamber, <b>Cupids Cavern</b>. This has a streamway rift in the floor entering from the right (QMC, possibly coming from the QM ?2019-3C above. Straight across <b>Cupids Cavern</b> another short section of rift leads into a small aven chamber with water entering on the left. A short traverse to the right leads to a phreatic keyhole passage, with the easiest going at roof level in the phreas. This ends at a very promising QMA. </i></p>
+  
+<p>To the L at the PT22 junction continue on the roped traverse  which leads to a crawling
 sized phreatic tube that soon arrives at a p4 with a tiny wet inlet
-in the roof at the head of the pitch. Below, the phreas continues as
+in the roof at the head of the pitch. Below the p4 the phreas continues as
 a crawl until a canyon develops in the floor which, after a couple of
-short climbs, arrives at the top of <b>Strained by Gravity </b>(p75)</p>
+short climbs down, arrives at the top of <b>Strained by Gravity,</b> p75.</p>
 
-<p><b> Simple Pleasures </b> drops into a small chamber, which leads quickly into a larger chamber, Cupids Cavern, which has a streamway rift in the floor entering from the right <i> (QMC, possibly coming from QM_not_worth_the_misery)</i>. Straight across the chamber another short section of rift leads into a small aven chamber with water entering on the left. A short traverse to the right leads to a phreatic keyhole passage, with the easiest going at roof level in the phreatic section. Seems to continue in a ESE direction (QMA). Very promising front. </p>
 
 <h3>Strained by Gravity to Watershed to Flowstone Canyon</h3>