From 87d2e019ba0d8873473fc63c199335f2445c2672 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: dave <devnull@localhost>
Date: Sun, 29 May 2005 00:44:02 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] [svn r6864] misc corrections

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 years/2005/surfacework.html | 13 +++++++------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/years/2005/surfacework.html b/years/2005/surfacework.html
index f2ffb6146..53cd6d401 100644
--- a/years/2005/surfacework.html
+++ b/years/2005/surfacework.html
@@ -26,11 +26,12 @@ href="../../smkridge/2002-10/2002-10.html">2002-10</a>, <a
 href="../../smkridge/2002-X11/2002-X11.html">2002-X11</a> through <a
 href="../../smkridge/2002-X18/2002-X18.html">2002-X18</a>: Entrances noted and
 GPSsed by Dunks in 2002, on a single long circular prospecting walk round the
-back of the Nieder Augst-Eck. Most of these are untagged, and have been given
-provisional numbers (indicated by the X prefix).</li>
+back of the Nieder Augst-Eck, and promptly forgotten about. Most of these are
+untagged, and have been given provisional numbers (indicated by the X
+prefix).</li>
 <li>Not to be outdone, Earl and Becka went for a walk with Martin's GPS in 2003
-and found eight more holes which promptly got forgotten about. At least they
-explored most of these at the time but <a
+and found eight more holes which promptly got forgotten about as well. At least
+they explored most of these at the time but <a
 href="../smkridge/2003-X12/2003-X12.html">2003-X12</a> and <a
 href="../smkridge/2003-X17/2003-X17.html">2003-X17</a> are undescended.</li>
 <li><a href="../../smkridge/2004-10/2004-10.html">2004-10</a>: discovered by
@@ -67,7 +68,7 @@ squeeze down past snow plug at -34m, just 9m above Crowning Glory.</li>
 <ul>
 <li><a href="../../smkridge/2000-08/2000-08.htm">2000-08</a>: Dig poised above
 Merry Fucking Christmas. If I can work out a sensible and safe rig to get into
-it, then I might have ago at it with a crowbar and a shovel.</li>
+it, then I might have a go at it with a crowbar and a shovel.</li>
 <li><a href="../../smkridge/2004-21/2004-21.html">2004-21</a>: Dig out the
 mysterious passage going down to the right (which is sometimes snow-choked but
 has never been descended). Danger of attack by flying saucers. (Needs tagging,
@@ -87,7 +88,7 @@ href="../../smkridge/2002-08/2002-08.html">2002-08</a> and <a
 href="../../smkridge/2002-XX/2002-XX.html">2002-XX</a>): revisit in
 consultation with Frank and determine if they go anywhere, and if there is a
 link to 204c (as has been suggested).</li>
-<li>Huge bag of caves 2003-X11 to 2003-X18 GPSsed by Earl + Becka in 2003 and
+<li>Huge bag of caves, 2003-X11 to 2003-X18, GPSsed by Earl + Becka in 2003 and
 promptly forgotten about; need re-finding, marking, and surveying where
 appropriate (they vary from the done to the completely undescended).</p>
 <li>161G + H: currently numbered as 2003-06 and 2004-12 respectively; to be