From 672fe1a008e4255b63f51690c963aa06f631d515 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: expo <expo@expobox.potato.hut>
Date: Sun, 8 Aug 2010 23:54:25 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] 258 desc

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 smkridge/258/desc.html          |  3 +--
 smkridge/258/littoralnorth.html | 46 +++++++++++++++++++--------------
 2 files changed, 28 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)

diff --git a/smkridge/258/desc.html b/smkridge/258/desc.html
index d8fe8833b..22084e425 100644
--- a/smkridge/258/desc.html
+++ b/smkridge/258/desc.html
@@ -149,8 +149,7 @@ down and passing a hole into <b>Stone Monkey</b>,
 to a pitch of a few metres landing on a sandy floor in an
 impressive chamber.
 Continuing northwards past the taped floor leads
-to the <a href="littoralnorth.html">Littoral North</a> and the main part of
-the cave.
+to the <a href="littoralnorth.html">Littoral North</a> and the main ways on.
 The other obvious exit leads to <b>Secret Squirrel</b>.
 
 <p>[more needed]
diff --git a/smkridge/258/littoralnorth.html b/smkridge/258/littoralnorth.html
index d978bf65a..9d9c50bb3 100644
--- a/smkridge/258/littoralnorth.html
+++ b/smkridge/258/littoralnorth.html
@@ -9,12 +9,33 @@
 <body>
 
 <table id="cavepage">
-<tr><th id="kat_no">258 - a b</th><th id="name">Tunnockschacht</th><th id="status">2 ??</th></tr>
+<tr><th id="kat_no">258 - a b</th><th id="name">Tunnockschacht: Littoral North</th><th id="status">2 ??</th></tr>
 </table>
 
-<p>Beyond the fine traverse of Caramel Catharsis a large sandy passage slopes 
-gently down to a junction. Ahead is a stoop leading though into the Littoral North.
-</p>
+<p>The Littoral North leads northwards out of the chamber below Caramel
+Catharsis past taped formations on the floor.  The roof lowers and the sandy
+passage continues to a further taped formation.  There is a branch to the
+left here [to be described].  The main way is through a low arch to a
+3m climb down in a rift below an aven, which
+can be climbed far enough to see that it probably doesn't go. At the bottom
+is a wide stony passage with a pool useful for collecting water.  There
+are ways on to the left and straight ahead.
+
+<p>To the left a passage leads almost immediately to a tricky climb
+(rope recommended)
+up to
+the right.  This gains a further muddy passage, which draughts inwards
+strongly, leading after about 50 metres to a balcony at the
+head of the 100m
+deep pitch <b>The Usual Suspects</b>.  This pitch is wet, and
+is impassible in times of high water (a party was marooned beneath it in
+2009), and is now superceded by the route via
+<b>String Theory</b>.  Across the pitch head may be seen a window accessible
+via the route to String Theory.
+
+<p>Back in the passage to the left, following straight ahead without taking
+the tricky climb to the right
+leads to a stepped pitch <b>Frankly Freezing</b> [description needed].
 
 [Description needed of Litteral north 4 - Julian Todd or Becka Lawson] 
 [2007-258-6B]
@@ -23,21 +44,8 @@ gently down to a junction. Ahead is a stoop leading though into the Littoral Nor
 [Description needed of stomach ulsa - Holly and Noel and Mike TA]
 [2009-258-39A]
 
-
-<h2>Littoral North</h2>
-
-<p>Beyond the stoop is a 3m climb down in a rift below an aven, which
-can be climbed far enough to see that it probably doesn't go. At the bottom
-is wide stony passage with obvious ways off to West and North. There
-is a handy water-filling pool here.</p>
-
-<p>West, there is a stepped pitch, <b>Frankly Freezing</b> down to the left, and a 3m
-climb up to the right of this (rope needed) leads into a strongly
-draughting (inwards) passage which goes about 50m to the edge of a
-large round pitch[2007-258-43-A]. A continuation [2007-258-42-B] can
-be seen 15m away across the far side.</p>
-
-<p>North (from the water-filling pool) a 2m climb up rotten calcite leads (past [2007-258-4-A], LHW) to an unusual
+<p>If the passage straight ahead is taken from the water collecting pool,
+a 2m climb up rotten calcite leads (past [2007-258-4-A], LHW) to an unusual
 critical-angle pile of 10cm diameter rocks <strong>Y KeyKey Beach</strong>. 
 The narrowing at the top of this pile
 (it gets close to the roof) has a stonking gale coming through it. Just