Remove some waddington wordiness

noinfo/make-folklist.py

@@ -82,15 +82,12 @@ table.fancy td.nonempty { background: #eee }
 <!-- DO NOT EDIT THIS DOCUMENT BY HAND! It is automatically generated. -->
 <h1>CUCC members and guests in Austria 1976 to present</h1>
 
-<p>Being a pretty much complete list of all the personnel on %d CUCC
+<p>This is a pretty much complete list of all the personnel on %d CUCC
 expeditions (there was no expo in 1986), together with the total number of 
-expeditions each has attended and the total number of people on each expedition. 
+expeditions each has attended and the total number of people on each expedition.</p>
-Names for the current year (as updated before departure) are always subject 
-to revision in the light of reality ! People sometimes get missed out because 
-no-one has told me their surnames :-( <!-- Sharon in 2000 --></p>
 
 <p>Qualification for inclusion involves some active contribution to the
-expedition such as going underground, surface surveying or sherpa-ing, or
+expedition such as going underground, surface surveying, sherpa-ing, camp-shopping or
 diving for resurgences. Years marked in <span style="didntcave">red</span>
 indicate some certainty that the person didn't go underground that year.
 Persons marked in <span class="didntcave">red</span> are thought to have never
@@ -99,15 +96,13 @@ See</span> for the resurgence has been counted as underground:- it certainly
 counts as effort expended in the pursuit of speleology!</p>
 
 <p>In the table, a section mark (&sect;) indicates someone who was an
-individual guest of CUCC or of a CUCC member, or who was a member of UBSS when
+individual guest of CUCC or of a CUCC member, or who was a member of UBSS or ULSA when
-they were present as a guest club in 1981 and 1982. I don't guarantee to have
+they were present as guest clubs in 1981,1982 or 2008-onwards. We don't guarantee to have
 got all such people correctly marked. Similarly, the currency symbol (&curren;)
 marks those who are (or were) individual members of the local Austrian group
 <span lang="de-at">Verein f&uuml;r H&ouml;hlenkunde im Obersteier</span>. A
-smiley or face icon indicates a link to a mugshot (and brief notes) in our
+face icon indicates a link to a mugshot (and brief notes) in our
-Rogues' Gallery - at present a few of these are still just raw jpegs with no
+Rogues' Gallery. Just one of the listed members is a vehicle - no prizes for
-html (and therefore no links), so you may have to use the back button to return
-to this page. Just one of the listed members is a vehicle - no prizes for
 guessing which one without looking at the photos :-)</p>
 
 <p>The table doesn't include the local cavers who have caved with us at various
@@ -148,9 +143,10 @@ for r in recordholders[1:k]:
 	print "%s (%d)," % (r[1][1:-1],r[0]),
 
 print """and %s (%d). Mark Shinwell holds the record for consecutive
-expos (10), followed by Julian Haines and Brian Outram (9 each). A
+expo attendance (10), but didn't actually go caving on all those, so
-more obscure record was set by Juliet Morse in 2010: longest interval
+this record arguably falls to Julian Haines and Brian Outram (9 each).
-between expos (14 years).""" %
+A more obscure record was set by Juliet Morse in 2010: longest
+interval between expos (14 years).""" %
 (recordholders[k][1][1:-1],recordholders[k][0])