From 22bfdf9f271150916d2f8d4a30de97c717586efa Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Expo on server <expo@expo.survex.com>
Date: Wed, 24 Jul 2024 15:59:08 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Note that wallet label needs to be filled in, and update
 diigital surveying terminology from 'PDA' - online edit of
 handbook/survey/newcave.html

---
 handbook/survey/newcave.html | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/handbook/survey/newcave.html b/handbook/survey/newcave.html
index 27f2a48f6..b8e264adc 100644
--- a/handbook/survey/newcave.html
+++ b/handbook/survey/newcave.html
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ actually do these things.
 
 <ul>
 <li>Write up your trip in the <a href="../logbooks.html">logbook</a> including rigging sketches<br /><br />
-<li>Put notes in a new wallet
+<li>Put notes in a new wallet, and fill the label on the wallet.
   <li>If it is a new cave, fill out a paper <a href="/handbook/l/new-cave-form.html">New Cave Data sheet</a>
 <li>Scan the notes (see <a href="newwallet.html#onlinew">"new wallet"</a> for the filenames to use and <a href="newwallet.html#scan">how to use the scanner</a>)
   <li>Type in survey data (in <a href="newsurvex.html#rightplace">the right place</a> in the file system) in survex format.<br />
@@ -74,9 +74,9 @@ actually do these things.
   <li><a href="/handbook/survey/athome.htm">Back in the UK</a>
 </ul>
 <p>This documentation assumes that you have recorded your survey data in 
-a  waterproof paper notebook. If instead you are using a PDA to record the survey readings
+  a  waterproof paper notebook. If instead you are doing paperless surveying (e.g with a phone) to record the survey readings
 digitally for your first cave, don't. Use the paper process first, then when you are familiar 
-the overall process, look at the <a href="pdanotes.html">PDA additional notes</a>.
+the overall process, look at the <a href="pdanotes.html">digital surveying additional notes</a>.
 
 <h3>The Process in brief</h3>
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